Cooper's video- A little fast, and confusing, but made sense and gives a good idea of what conflict is.
Andrew's video- Very catchy! But didn't have that much info/examples in it. Still good though.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U5xa7-mUmHQ- Helpful info, but when the deep voice comes in, it makes it really confusing.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-5w3Jo89_GU- Very useful, but if I made a negative about this video, it would be the handwriting is alittle sloppy. And the music throws the reader off. I really wouldn't count these, there just tiny little negatives. In all I really wouldn't say there is a negative about it. But very useful to inform the reader.
Anonymous +it has alot of info. -it is hard to concentrate on the writing Anonymous +it helped me understand plot a little more -it is hard to read madison l. +helps you understand the elements in the story -a little childish
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The photo showed a bue-eyed,blonde-haired,girl captivated by the clown.
For dinner we ate four,giant,banana pancakes
Israel
The photo showed a blue-eyed, blond-haired girl captivated by the clown.
For dinner we ate four giant banana pancakes.
The photo showed a blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl captivated by the clown.
For diner we ate four giant, banana pancakes
The photo showed a blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl captivated by the clown.
For dinner we ate four, giant, banana pancakes.
the photo showed a blu-eyed,blonde-haired girl captivated by the clown.
for dinner we ate four giant banana pancakes.
Olivia K.
The photo showed a blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl captivated by the clown.
For dinner we ate four, giant, banana pancakes.
The photo showed a blue-eyed, blond-haired girl captivated by the clown.
For dinner we ate four giant banana pancakes.
Haley King
Cooper Johnson
The Photo showed a blue-eyed,blonde-haired girl captivated by the clown.
For dinner we ate four giant banana pancakes.
1. the photo showed a blue-eyed, blond-haired girl, captivated by the clown.
2. for dinner we ate four giant, banana pancakes.
The picture showed a blonde-haired, blue-eyed girl captivated by the clown.
We had four giant banana pancakes.
The first one says " The photo showed a blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl captivated by the clown."
The second one says "For dinner we ate four giant banana pancakes."
Matthew Fowler
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U5xa7-mUmHQ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-5w3Jo89_GU
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c6I24S72Jps
Madison Larocque
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-5w3Jo89_GU
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c6I24S72Jps
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c6I24S72Jps
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u5pU5DNjoXY
On cooper's group video, it is:
+ gives a fantastic definition
- a little fast and confusing
Matthew Fowler
On andrew Fansler's Group Video:
+ Good video/catchy
- little info/examples
Matthew Fowler
On andrew Fansler's Group Video:
+ Good video/catchy
- little info/examples
Matthew Fowler
On andrew harris's group video:
+ lots of info/ examples
- confusing when DEEP voice speaks
Matthew Fowler
On Coopers video;
+ explains that conflict does not have to be violence
- The writing can be confusing
Cooper's video made sense at first but then it was confusing.
Andrew's video was helpful but a little too fast.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U5xa7-mUmHQ was useful but with too much background effects going on.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-5w3Jo89_GU very helpful, well explained, can't find a problem.
The picture showed a blonde-haired, blue-eyed girl captivated by the clown.
We had four giant banana pancakes.
Cooper's video- A little fast, and confusing, but made sense and gives a good idea of what conflict is.
Andrew's video- Very catchy! But didn't have that much info/examples in it. Still good though.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U5xa7-mUmHQ- Helpful info, but when the deep voice comes in, it makes it really confusing.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-5w3Jo89_GU- Very useful, but if I made a negative about this video, it would be the handwriting is alittle sloppy. And the music throws the reader off. I really wouldn't count these, there just tiny little negatives. In all I really wouldn't say there is a negative about it. But very useful to inform the reader.
Andrews made sense but waaay to fast for me to keep up
On Isreal's group:
+like the pizzeas and content
-no real videos just voiceovers
On all but Isreal:
+Good content
-Same video over and over and over
coopers video:
+ explained conflict very well
- went by very quickly with the writing
Olivias video
+explained plot good
- the video was very sloppy with writing
Madisons video:
+ The rapping in the video was helpful and quicker to learn.
- There was no specified point to go to.
-Israel
israel's video
+very detailed
-only voice overs
cooper's video
+informational
-boring
olivia's video
+explained well
-writing illegible
Andrew Fansler
Anonymous
+it has alot of info.
-it is hard to concentrate on the writing
Anonymous
+it helped me understand plot a little more
-it is hard to read
madison l.
+helps you understand the elements in the story
-a little childish
Joella Steffenson
the first video was good and it really defined characterization, but it seemed pretty boring.
the second video was good because it defined plot and how it develops well, but again it was kind of boring.
madison's video was really catchy but it kind of lacked good definitions at some points.
i found that olivia and andrew's videos were the same as the second video so my critique is the same for both as the second
cooper's video was good because it explained conflict well but could be somewhat confusing
Joella Steffenson
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WsfLxsx8lQI&feature=related
Haley king
Cooper's:
+made sence, good definition
-little confusing
Olivia's:
+explained plot well
-writting sloppy
Madison's:
+catchy
-not much example wise
On Joella's,
+ good content, easy to understand
- Boring and hard to keep focus on
http://teachertube.com/viewVideo.php?video_id=1535
Andrew:
+Explains all of the 5 elements
-There isn't a lot of info on any of the elements that are said
Cooper:
+Explains the conflict really well
-Sort of confusing
Israel:
+Good content
-No video
Joella:
+Easy to understand
-Way too long
Andrew-
+ It was easy to understand
- Fast
Cooper-
+ Good information
- To fast and confusing
Israel-
+ It had good information and good examples
- The voice was distracting
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